Well, I received a reply from an agent to my query for “The Ardent Admirer.”   She said she liked my riding style (a compliment!), but she didn’t connect with the main character as much as she wanted to.  Drat.  The character as I wrote him is supposed to be vain, selfish, egotistical and thinks far more of himself than any one else.  I guess I succeeded wildly there.

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